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04. immortal by ~ItsxMagik:iconItsxMagik:

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based on an equally-horrifying dream.




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31 writing prompts
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~Awasteof-paint Jul 7, 2009, 4:47:52 PM
i love the first and last lines! :heart:

i like how this was inspired by a dream.
dreams are so cool like that. :)

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we will fold and freeze together far away from here.
:iconvelocity07:
~velocity07 Jul 7, 2009, 4:50:02 PM
Oh, this is creepy. I had chills from the very first sentence, and that's no lie. I love every bit of it!
:XD:

I've had similarly horrific dreams!
:iconthe-chemical-factory:
~the-chemical-factory Jul 7, 2009, 4:55:58 PM
the first line is my favorite,
amazing :heart:

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my boy builds coffins he makes them all day
but it's not just for work and it isn't for play
he's made one for himself, one for me too
one of these days he'll make one for you
:iconp0laroids:
~p0laroids Jul 7, 2009, 4:59:46 PM
can i have your writing skills?
this just totally blew my mind away. seriously. <3

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Flickr
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~eXcitedfreAkk Jul 7, 2009, 5:13:26 PM
It's not that creepy. I think it's pretty snazzy. :)

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:roll::phonecall::orange::nod::excited::tunes:
:iconx-winglessangel:
~X-winglessAngel Jul 7, 2009, 5:21:54 PM
wow, creepy, but in a good way. I don't know if anyone else will think this but through this whole thing i kept thinking to myself Boo Radley from To kill a Mockingbird. But that is jsut my opinion. Good job!! <3

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Sui ipsius amor maximus est amor
~the greatest love is the love of oneself~
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~BrightsideKiller Jul 7, 2009, 6:09:35 PM
Morbid, in the most amazing way possible.

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I need you to keep it together, so I can fall a p a r t.
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~Zenius-I-Vanisher Jul 7, 2009, 6:12:00 PM
woa.

this was amazing.

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Submissive catboy, lolwut.
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~TheAfterWhys Jul 7, 2009, 6:46:41 PM
shudders that last line was a perfectly creepy ending.

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Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconlosingmyfaith:
*losingmyfaith Jul 7, 2009, 7:07:14 PM
oo, great job! i liked it (:

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
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