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21. death by *ItsxMagik:iconItsxMagik:

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i don't know. this was difficult to write. and difficult to submit. (i am going to call the thesaurus-people and have them make "cancer" a direct antonym of "glamourous.")

elysian has got to be one of my favourite words. it means "being of such surpassing excellence as to suggest inspiration by the gods."

oh and, the tokyo-traffic mind part was inspired by a conversation with the lovely + amazing ohsostarryeyed.







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*Blueskye27 May 24, 2009, 10:26:49 AM
Powerful and sad. I can see how it would be difficult to write.
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*ItsxMagik May 24, 2009, 10:31:05 AM
Thanks Cindy. I appreciate the comment :heart:

--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
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~loverz116 May 24, 2009, 10:41:32 AM
wow. very very sad.

it's nice seeing point of view from the cancer person rather than the outsider watching their love one go away.
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*beigegray May 24, 2009, 10:53:42 AM
one being
who pushes thoughts of mortality into my
overcrowded tokyo-traffic head.

Fantastic work, I enjoyed it a lot :heart:

--
And I asked myself about the present: how wide it was, how deep it was, how much was mine to keep.
--Vonnegut
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~myahlucille133 May 24, 2009, 11:33:11 AM
I added this to my Favourites, not just because you're my personal friend but because you have a wonderful talent that no one is able to recognize ecept for the people the read between the lines and decipher the clues, i am one of those people, i have read between the lines of your alibis and wonder are you really the person you say you are? no. but this beautiful peom has told me who you really are... A wonderfully talented person with a beautiful personality.

may i have the privlage to be in your company for many years to come.

[iloveyou]

--
Love blooms even on the darkest of nights, even under the light of the brightest of moons, love is here and it's the closest thing we have to magic.



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~Awasteof-paint May 24, 2009, 1:09:31 PM
this is so sad, but it was really beautifully written.

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we will fold and freeze together far away from here.
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~the-chemical-factory May 24, 2009, 1:23:37 PM
this is amazing.
:heart:

--

i'll move to paris,
shoot some heroin
and fuck with the stars.

♫
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*DarkRiderDLMC May 24, 2009, 2:31:59 PM
"elysian has got to be one of my favourite words. it means "being of such surpassing excellence as to suggest inspiration by the gods."

or "blissful"... :D

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So, I pull my coat back and real slow (no reason to start it up yet) I rest my hand by the Smith. Then I give them that cold smile and in the low, soft killing voice I say, "Gentlemen, I'm your worst nightmare. A gunfighter with a rendering station"
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~hungry4edward May 24, 2009, 2:54:30 PM
You rock! :heart:

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does this deafening silence mean nothing to no one but me?
:icondevelindiskies:
Mood: Sadness ~develindiskies May 24, 2009, 3:10:03 PM
Oh so sad but so lovely too.

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love is the prescription written for loneliness
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