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so let go
and then jump in
well,
what you waiting for?
it's alright
'cause there's beauty
in the breakdown


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i had an urge to write.

it's a little long, sorry.
read it anyway? ^^

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:music: a static lullaby
31 writing prompts
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:iconexcitedfreakk:
I'm not sure if I get it. But it's really nice.

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:roll::phonecall::orange::nod::excited::tunes:
:iconitsxmagik:
Thanks! :3
Which parts do you not understand?


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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconexcitedfreakk:
I don't think I know what you're trying to say in the poem.

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:roll::phonecall::orange::nod::excited::tunes:
:iconorange-lily:
I love this.
I could say more.. but I'd just be rambling on about how good it is.

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Love is like war: easy to begin, hard to end.
-Proverb


Kiss me under the mistletoe...please? :heart:
:iconlosingmyfaith:
loved it (: loved this line, "windy whisper weaving through willow branches," the alliteration in that is amazing great job!

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconitsxmagik:
Aw thanks so much Chelsea :heart:

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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconitsxmagik:
Thank you! :hug:

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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconmaireemargaret:
I did a general fiction piece for the 31 Writing Prompts, too. Sometimes you just have more to say than a poem can hold.

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what goes around is all around.
tpb
:iconitsxmagik:
Yes, exactly! :nod:

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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconitsxmagik:
The girl's lover died, and she's finally letting go.
Maybe read it again? ^^


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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.

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