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Author's CommentsIMPORTANT EDIT: I changed the line breaks in this. it's the same as before, only with much better line breaks. also, I'm passing this in as my final English poem project so please let me know if I should change anything. thank you. - - - unrequited love. love that is not openly reciprocated, even though reciprocation is usually deeply desired. the beloved may or may not be aware of the admirer's deep affections. (sometimes stanzas hastily scribbled on the back end of a notebook cover are the best I've ever written.)
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this was beautiful, i have so many favorite bits in this i don't think i can put them in my comment, so i'll just have to tell you one of them
d like
everyone else's. i wonder
if, like her mouth, she keeps
her eyes
open when she kisses
you, to see the light in your
eyes burn holes through their
thin skin cover
this bit in my opinion is beautiful, like all your poetry (:
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Dreams can come true, but never fantasies, if you nurture a fantasy, it'll most likely get broken.
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listlessheartssignhere.
♥?
Thank you so much for your comments.
I love reading them.
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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
breaking your ankle sounds marginally more painful.
and no problem, they're fun to write (:
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Dreams can come true, but never fantasies, if you nurture a fantasy, it'll most likely get broken.
Beautiful.
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Love is like war: easy to begin, hard to end.
-Proverb
Kiss me under the mistletoe...please?
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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
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make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
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Love is like war: easy to begin, hard to end.
-Proverb
Kiss me under the mistletoe...please?
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you were the fire in my eyes,
but i wanted to put you out.
i wish i had better words to tell you how perfect this is
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raphael does photography, too!
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